Monday, March 28, 2005

Verbal imagery - I

He shook her hands for the last time, and in an instant a thin film of sweat between their palms was all that connected the two of them. He couldn't look into her eyes; he turned around and got into his car. He could spot her silhouette in his rearview mirror as she stood before her burning headlights. As the skies wept, the winds howled and the dead leaves murmured in dissent as the tyres zoomed past them, he stared at her image in his rearview mirror, like a photograph traveling the journey of time, growing hazy and distant with every minute till she was a ghost of a shadow the image left on the mirror, a distant memory that time's left in his heart.

4 Comments:

Blogger Rajasree said...

Seemed like an illusion in the first...then thought much deep about it and felt this immense sense of freedom in my mind...like a fleeting past of light performing a highware act...a little and subtle piece of good writing which touches your heart..

9:40 AM  
Blogger Kumari said...

Beautiful :)

9:46 AM  
Blogger Sachin Dev T said...

ahem ahem !! Did U just have a revelation about this ? or was it this weekend ?

10:17 AM  
Blogger Rathish said...

@rajasree & kumari - thank you! thank you!

@Sachin - the epiphany occurred no a dull thursday evening when a beautiful girl disappeared from the rear view mirror of the car that I was traveling in. Weekend had no such "life-changing" moments. Before you ask, part II also had nothing to do with the weekend ;)

10:56 AM  

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